CREATIVE WORLD AWARDS INDIVIDUAL SCORECARD
TITLE OF SCREENPLAY: Death Wind
WRITER(S): Travis Heermann and Jim Pinto
LOG LINE: When a pioneer doctor uncovers a series of bizarre murders near an Indian reservation and army post, he must confront a mysterious tribe of sub-human cannibals to save his small prairie town from the cannibals' dark god, a bloodthirsty sentient tornado.
GENRE: Horror/Thriller/Fantasy
JUDGING ROUND: Prelim
Judge's Recommendation: Consider
Computer Average of all 5 Categories: 8.44
Basics
Overall view of basics: Very Good
Level of grammatical accuracy? (1-10): 8.5
Correct format, indentions, & scene headings? (1-10) : 8.5
Overall style and depth of narrative? (1-10): 8.5
Is the genre clear? (1-10): 9
Is the writing concise, action driven, & visual? (1-10): 8.5
Average basics score: 8.60
I have not included the lengthy notes they provided, but needless to say, we did very well.
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